<p>Overall, I think this manuscript has great potential. However, it needs some work before it could be considered for publication. One of the main issues with the manuscript is that it is not written following APA style guidelines. This is a REQUIREMENT for publication in the journal. Another issues is related with grammar, syle, and punctuation. I made some editorial changes to the manuscript, but the authors are encourage to revise the full manuscript, in particular, revise choice of words and sentence structure. Lastly, the authors are encuraged to address the comments I made throughout the manuscript. For your convencience I'm attaching a word document with track changs and all my comments on the side. I hope the authors find my feedback helpful and I encourage them to re-write and resubmit again.&nbsp;</p>