<p>Recommendations:</p><p> </p><ol><li>The article should be in double space according by APA</li><li>The article use inclusive language that make sense in Spanish but but in English</li><li>Terms in Spanish language should be in italics</li><li>Some APA style issues should be address:<ol><li>Some authors are mentioned “et al” without mentioning the other authors first</li><li>Reformulate the purpose of the study, it have a lot of methodological information that is unnecessary.</li><li>Enumerating the research question is recommended.</li><li>Introduction is too short; it does not justify the study.</li><li>I don’t understand the Researcher section</li><li>Tables are not APA style</li></ol></li></ol><p>10. Interviewing participants in a car was part of the protocol?</p><p>11. The researches notice that one participant didn’t meet the criteria after she was interviewed?</p><p>12. Is the interviews were in Spanish, why is the article in English? The researchers understand the consequences of translating the participant’s interviews? This is not included in the limitations section.</p><p>13. Conclusion is too general.</p><p>14. All the Spanish words have to be at list in italic </p>