I commend the researcher for exploring factors influencing the dropout rate of students at the university level in Paraguay. The introduction and literature review was rich with information and helpful to understanding the complexity of the concept "dropout." 

Methodology needs some work. Some specific things could be added as to why the researcher decided to use a pilot questionnaire as opposed to perhaps other more established instruments. 

Results were descriptive as stated in the goal of the paper, however, discussion seemed to be lacking strong learning points from this research. I would love to see the researcher elaborate more on their results as opposed to reporting them again. It also appeared that the researcher was evaluating the instrument used and that was not a stated purpose of this paper. I believe the Discussion section can be much stronger. 

I would recommend contracting the assistance of a reader to help with English translation and editing for grammatical errors. Last, there were portions of the paper (pg5-6) where the Spanish section was included and the following paragraphs followed in English. I would delete those Spanish portions from the paper if submitting in English or vice versa. 